From 4224025b58aeb1ac44e799f37a081ce40ae4cdf1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Fabian Keil <fk@fabiankeil.de>
Date: Sat, 13 Nov 2010 13:23:12 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] The two bugs mentioned did actually cause connections to
 hang, so don't weasel around it with "appear to".

While at it, split the summary into three paragraphs.
---
 README                 | 15 +++++++++------
 doc/source/readme.sgml | 13 +++++++++----
 2 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README b/README
index 32fcc6ac..f101cd36 100644
--- a/README
+++ b/README
@@ -60,12 +60,15 @@ Helping hands and donations are welcome:
 
 November 2010, Privoxy 3.0.17 stable is released.
 
-This is mainly a bug-fix release for the previously released Privoxy 3.0.16. It
-contains fixes for two bugs that could cause connections to appear to hang
-under certain circumstances when keep-alive support was enabled. As usual,
-there are also a bunch of minor improvements. For details please see the
-"ChangeLog", the "What's New" section or the "Upgrader's Notes" in the User
-Manual.
+This is mainly a bug-fix release for the previously released Privoxy 3.0.16.
+
+It contains fixes for two bugs that could cause connections to hang under
+certain circumstances when keep-alive support was enabled, until they timed
+out or where closed by the server.
+
+As usual, there are also a bunch of minor improvements. For details please
+see the "ChangeLog", the "What's New" section or the "Upgrader's Notes" in
+the User Manual.
 
 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
 
diff --git a/doc/source/readme.sgml b/doc/source/readme.sgml
index 7637ec4d..3faa66ba 100644
--- a/doc/source/readme.sgml
+++ b/doc/source/readme.sgml
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
 
  Purpose     :  README for Privoxy
                 
- $Id: readme.sgml,v 2.41 2010/11/10 22:01:42 fabiankeil Exp $
+ $Id: readme.sgml,v 2.42 2010/11/13 13:04:39 fabiankeil Exp $
 
  Copyright (C) 2001-2010 Privoxy Developers http://www.privoxy.org/
  See LICENSE.
@@ -133,8 +133,13 @@
 <para>
  This is mainly a bug-fix release for the previously released
  Privoxy 3.0.16.
- It contains fixes for two bugs that could cause connections to appear
- to hang under certain circumstances when keep-alive support was enabled.
+</para>
+<para>
+ It contains fixes for two bugs that could cause connections to hang
+ under certain circumstances when keep-alive support was enabled,
+ until they timed out or where closed by the server.
+</para>
+<para>
  As usual, there are also a bunch of minor improvements.
  For details please see the "ChangeLog", the "What's New" section or
  the "Upgrader's Notes" in <citetitle>the User Manual</citetitle>.
@@ -239,7 +244,7 @@
 <!-- </LiteralLayout> -->
 <!-- </para> -->
 <!-- <para> -->
-<!--  $Id: readme.sgml,v 2.41 2010/11/10 22:01:42 fabiankeil Exp $ -->
+<!--  $Id: readme.sgml,v 2.42 2010/11/13 13:04:39 fabiankeil Exp $ -->
 <!-- </para> -->
 
 </article>
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